Saturday, 1 October 2011

Journey of a flower

So here's to start with, a poem which is an attempt to describe a girl's life with the help of a flower.I don't know how this sounds, but i just saw a beautiful example portrayed in the nature and thought it needs to be penned down.

 Journey of a flower 

A sweet little bud,
knows not to bloom,
comes in this world,
with quite a boom.

The world which appears free,
was not so as it appears to be;
many bees caught it's eyes,
which seemed to be nice.

With lots of difficulty,
it bloomed out in a frenzy;
seeing this blooming beauty,
the bees couldn't leave their duty.

With an attractive gait,
it sucked the honey;
the most beautiful scene,
seen forever in this whole journey.

The flower was happy and fresh,
as she was blessed;
her work for this journey got over;
with a new look,
she came again ! and again !


- Sahana pai





2 comments:

  1. Ah, a metaphorical poem..Should have expected it from you, you thinker B)

    Keep writing more!

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  2. so beautifully woven in emotions...simply explicit.. kudos saha... :)

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